eclipse
tender, waxen, etched and worn, the ways
we’ve tried to burn, to warm the dark, soften,
yield the sole regret, return unknown
the solid, heartache, to a final lighted place.
all these depend on the leaving,
the angle of the sun, the moon, whether or not
good terms and willing allow them to pass, to pause,
offering a few the rare trick of light, the illusion
of a ring of flame, really two sovereign
coursing a measured space
to blaze a brilliant hour before the rest,
before the stolen are snipped, snuffed and blown,
until the ember still for a while on our lips,
pursing, pops and plummets, a sputtering tail,
until the last bright being flickers and fails,
a gray unwinding stretched thin, threading
is and was and may be, only once upon a time.


Honestly when I first read this I was like “where did she get this from??” Of course I know you wrote it, but it’s so good that it really could exist in some poetry book that undergrads study in college. I really like the imagery here and the ideas of chance and opportunity being related to the heavenly bodies. At least that’s what I took from it. My favorite lines are the last 2…..the idea of a fairy tale w/o the typical happy ending.
I’m sending many happy endings your way my dear! love you…..and keep writing- it’s so very good
Renee
January 25, 2009 at 9:16 pm